Bitter sweet memories of you..
i see my life
with a birds eye view..
don't ask me how i feel..
oh..yeah..
don't ask me how i feel..
i close my eyes..
i can see your face..
it seems the same..
but of that smile there's no trace..
there's no trace..
i try and look deeper..coz i can't relate..
don't ask me how i feel..
oh..yeah...
don't ask me...how i feel..
i close my eyes..
and think of you..
Ur beside me..
we are looking out of the window at a poster..
your telling me a story..
i can hear my laughter clearly..
but there's something stuck in my throat..
don't ask me how i feel..
oh yeah..
don't ask me..how i feel..
i hate this feeling...
it's so different, it's so new..
I only wish i could forgive you...
Coz it's not easy to relate..
it makes me suffocate..
don't ask me how i feel...
coz in words i can't reveal...
what your love have done...
and what i have become...
-Ishma
11 comments:
wah wah....uttam ...atti uttam...."oh yeah" ka uchaarn is perfect...
ohh..yeah..thanks :)
a singer,an engineer, a poetess!!?....anything i haven't seen yet?..great job keep going:)
In your words wonleee... After reading this dont ask me how i feel, coz words cant reveal... :)
he he good one but i wont tell how was it.. oh yeah.. but i wont tell how was it..:) it nice..:)
good one da it ll definitely make it ointo some english school text book :P
Thanks all :)
absolutely awesome ... simple language, stirring emotions ... loved it
chalo ... mera sikhaya hua sab kaam aa raha hai ... keep it up :D
Great... moved me into my old memories... Oh yeah Dont ask me why... thats the power of "feeling Poem" from a "felt Poetess..." :-)
@kovid- i know i know.. ;)
@Vidyanag- Thanks so much!
beautiful poem. hope to see more of such stuff! :)
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